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Susanti D (18385)
Foto ini diambil pas lagi latihan foto wedding outdoor..
20 tahun yang lalu
Komposisi sdh. baik dan benar, fokus obyek cukup tajam dan pencahayaannya sdh. pas. Expresi obyek bagus dan warna tajam. Good shoot!
What a beautiful model. She definitely showed a nice facial expression. The soft & even lighting condition is very suitable for a shot like this. I have a few nitpicks with this photo though. First, I found the background to be a little distracting. It's neither out of focus nor sharp enough; it's kinda in between, which made it distracting. I think I would've liked this shot better if you had selected a wider aperture (less depth of field), so the background wouldn't be as sharp. Second, the model's arms made her look like she was slouching...which doesn't look very flattering. Putting her arms in front of her, with both hands together would have looked nicer IMO. Third, the way you cropped her arms near the wrists also kinda bothered me. If I were you, I would've either taken this shot a little tighter (thus eliminating the empty space on top of her head), or took a three-quarter shot so her arms wouldn't be cropped like that. Just my 2 cents.
wow tajamnya...
Wow ayune!!!
wow.. cantiknya kak...
Nice portrait shot.
sesuai judulnya ..
selamat latihan wedding shoot :) good start
Wah wah wah cakep bgt modelnya
cakeb bgt bu....fotonya juga keren loh........mau wedding yaaa??......hwhehhehehehhehe......
Cantik modelnya.. sedikit dicrop lebih ok kayaknya.
BG okeh...setujuuuu..? ...model okeh juga.
nice modeling shot
Cantik
nice pict... but, bagian atas dicrop sedikit!! trus, antara busana weddingnya dengan BG dibelakang busana(warna putih), terlihat menyatu... jadi bingung, mana yang BG, mana yang busana(badan si model)...
Pencahayaan bagus, background cucok .... hmm tapi yang penting lagi modelnya oke punya ... :)
cantik
ekspresinya udah pas cuamn head room terlalu lebar. bagian kiri frame dan atas mendingan di crop aja.Coca diambil dengan lensa 200 mm mungkin blur di belakang lebih bagus kali ya.
nice wedding photo :)
excellent portrait...
memang menarik
komposisi bisa diperbaiki dg mengurangi BG atasnya. + potongan ditangan kurang enak. setuju ama om very, burning di lengan terlalu keras, shg lengan mjd kecoklatan
cantik dan menawan .... bagian atas bisa dicrop sedikit .... warna putih di antara tangan kanan dan perut sedikit membingungkan karena warnanya cenderung senada dengan gaun .... apakah itu jalan atau bagian dari gaun? .... warna kulit di lengan juga cenderung kelihatan gradasinya dari coklat ke putih .... imho
Model menarik. Ekspresi natural. IMHO... dof bisa dipersempit agar BG lebih blur. BG putih bawah tengah mengganggu. Pose nanggung. Bisa dicoba bermain backlighting. Atau foto ini bisa dikropping sebatas wajah hingga dada. Maaf cuma usul ya. Salam.
Wow ....sangat tajam ....