"shadow me light" 


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shadow me, light
nshadow, me light or
nshadow me light
n
nopo ae...
n
ni just want to say that
nlight makes my shadow
nand the shadow makes me two
nbut i'll never have it entire day...
nthe real shadow from the real light...
n
nand you just like a shadow to me...
n
ni'll never ever have you even you are the sahdow of my life
n
ni'll make another shadow,
nthat lighten my life
n
nlet this black come into an end
n
n...
n
nhehehehe
nngomong ngawur
n
nyah monggo kale mau ngritik puisi yang ndak nyambung atau bahasa ingg dg grammar salah
nhehehehe
n
nsofie

  • Nilai foto: 49
  • Dilihat: 159
  • Waktu upload: Senin, 06 Aug 2007
  • Lokasi: home surabaya, Jawa Timur, Indonesia
Kategori
Still Life
Shooting Data
  • Aperture: f/5.6
  • Speed: 1/30
  • ISO: 0
  • Kamera: Canon canon EOS 350D *
  • Lensa: Canon EF-S 18-55mm F/3.5-5.6 *
  • Filter: -
  • * Masih menggunakan daftar alat lama yang mungkin tidak akurat.
Kritik dan Komentar
 Steve Chong, arps (19245)

16 tahun yang lalu

Dian, first off, thanks for commenting on my photos. I rarely do still life these days, I don't know why, perhaps I have crossed over the peak of creating still life images. I have fortunately moved into creating conceptual images. Though there are relationships btw. the two, the latter however, was even more challenging not only to the way we set up the lightings but also to how the mind "see" the images. I cordially invite you to take a journey into my conceptual work on my website. ======================== As far as this image is concerned, technically I feel the image is "pale" pale in the sense that the colors aren't brilliant enough, since those are color buttons(?). Why not convert it into b/w and give it a nice and delicate tone? The composition on the other hand could be improve. I have to admit, my eyes don't feel too comfortable with the with big half-circle thing edged in from the top. That little part of the button could be cloned/eliminated. Having said all that Dian, you have the eye :-) Keep shooting! - steve

 Sanityasa (102733)

16 tahun yang lalu

feminin sekali karya2mu....keren mbak :)

 Edy Subagio, yoyok (47572)

16 tahun yang lalu

salute makin berani tampil...............asyik mbak sofie..............aplaus n salam

 I Wayan Agus Harry Paryana (25322)

16 tahun yang lalu

komposisi nya pas banget...bokehnya asikkkkk nice shot

 Madia Krisnadi W. (9174)

16 tahun yang lalu

asik nih maen ruang tajamnya....

 Nur Adie Saputra (40324)

16 tahun yang lalu

keren sof ... komposisinya ok banget ... Lightingnya keren ... SL khaas sofie banget hiahiaha ... salam

 Ganda Wijaya,PEK (6014)

16 tahun yang lalu

lagi patah hati-kah?:D. still image yg bagus.lihgting jg ok.imho,ada objek, yg mengganggu di bagian kiri tengah.:).salam.

 Willy Tikoalu, Dablekz (80745)

16 tahun yang lalu

he...... he......he........... fotonya keren keren mbak, inget eskrim jadinya saya he...he..e.. Suka dengan fotonya yang penuh dengan warna. thank's for sharing great photo.

 Indriayu Afriana (1475)

16 tahun yang lalu

idenya aku suka mbak cuma eksekusi nya masih kurang,..bagian shadow nya terlalu gelap,..emang shadow begitu yah :D tapi jadi kurang enak aja ,..yah mungkin karena terlalu gelap yah :)

Ferry Kristiawan (1901)

16 tahun yang lalu

Nice Pic... tone nya oks bgt... Nice object...... Good Shoot Non...lam kenal

Tanna Rizki Almamia (1469)

16 tahun yang lalu

Nice idea...Cantik conceptnya...tp agak kurang terang dikit... <>